Trailer Feedback
As our target audience are mainly young adults we decided that a perfect way to attain feedback would be to post our trailer onto social media platforms. We decided to post our trailer onto Facebook so that people could provide both positive and negative feedback through commenting on the video. It meant that we could also reply to the comments, to ask extended questions, and find out their deeper opinions.
We were very pleased with the feedback we got through social media, as the majority was positive, with people mentioning key words associated with our genre such as 'spooky' and 'creepy' with people also expressing their interest in seeing the whole film. We also received constructive criticism such as to include more low key lighting, and increase the volume of the sound effects, which we acted upon immediately.
We also created a questionnaire which we handed out to members of our target audience, specifically to people in our sixth form with an interest in film and media. Our questionnaire included many open questions such as 'Could you give us feedback on what you thought of the ending of our trailer?' and 'What are your opinions on the music and sound effects'. Similarly to our Facebook feedback we got a range of feedback, with mixed comments such as 'I love that she is a young Mother, and you are addressing the issue' but then others saying they were a bit concerned about her age. Much of the feedback was the same as what we received through social media, allowing us to make certain decisions about what changes needed to be made, explained below.
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| Questionnaire Examples |
Positive Feedback:
- The ending is very ambiguous and dramatic, with audiences not knowing who is on screen and what is the conclusion - "I want to see the rest of it"
- The build up of music and editing pace intensity, increasing the feelings of excitement towards the end of the trailer
- The relationship that can be built with the characters, and the unique and intriguing plot which perfectly suits the crime-thriller genre.
Negative Feedback:
- After presenting our pitch and showing our trailer to our classmates and teachers one of our main pieces of feedback was a concern about audiences feeling the plot was unrealistic due to the young age of the Mother.
- In the beginning section (equilibrium stage) sometimes the wind ruined the clarity of the dialogue and other diegetic sounds.
- The first section is possibly too much like a chronological scene - incorporate something creative to increase pace and non-chronological convention of thrillers
- Could possibly add in inter titles? Date of release?
- Might be more professional to add in institutional information and age certification
- Sound effects could be louder and more varied
- Include more low-key lighting, as this is crucial of the thriller genre
Change 1:
From the start of our planning process we know that we wanted to create a film with a real purpose, that sent an important message to audiences. As thrillers are conventionally aimed at the young adult target audiences we felt our message should apply to this age gap. A topic that is extremely controversial is the case of young mothers. Therefore, we attempted to create a trailer with the prospects of defying the criticism that comes with teenage pregnancy. We wanted the young Mothers determination at the end of the trailer to outweigh her irresponsibility at the beginning of the trailer, also showing development in her character. To make it clear that the Mothers age was intentional we decided to add in voiceover whispers of unknown people making statements regarding her age, however then contrasting this with footage displaying her utter determination. We also made the detectives concerns about her age clear, asking the question - 'and you are 18 I believe', meaning that if the audiences did have concerns they would be able to directly identify with this character, but are also able to believe in the young mothers abilities. We also decided to purposefully emphasise her youth through the use of costume, wearing a young and fashionable outfit, that the target audience would also be likely to wear.
Change 2:
Wind was an issue in some footage in the opening of our trailer. As re-filming wasn't an option due to the availability of our child actress we had to record voiceovers that matched what was said in the original footage, to then put over the top in editing. However, we wanted there to still be realistic background noise, therefore imported audio clips we had of children playing, and also downloaded sound effects of children playing in the park. To the right is a screenshot of our editing software, of the sound effects layers we added in named 'giggle' and 'playing'. This meant that the wind did not distort the clarity of what was occurring in our trailer, however the environment was still realistic. We also used the 'audio gain' button to increase the volume of the diegetic dialogue, meaning it was more distinguishable amongst the non-diegetic sounds.

Change 3:
To speed up the pace, and to stop the first section of our trailer appearing too much like continuous editing, we decided to include extremely fast paced 'flashback' sections when the Mum has realised Rosie is missing. These were various shots filmed on the day of Rosie laughing, playing and giggling. Using the Fast Colour Corrector tool on Premiere Pro I was able to add a bluey coloured tint to these flashback sections - making it clear to audiences that they were not in real time. In editing we also experimented with making the flashback shots black and white, however felt this wasn't suitable when presenting a young child, as the black and white effect is normally associated with history and the older generations. We also thought that the black and white video effect wouldn't smoothly merge with the rest of our trailer, as the entire trailer is in colour.
We presented these flashbacks in groups of three, all lasting half a second, showing the panic of the Mothers memories and how she was having many thoughts about her Daughter at once. We felt this change helped to make a more interesting and visually intriguing trailer, particularly making the first section of our trailer stronger.
Change 4:
In our first draft of our trailer we had no inter-titles except from the title sequence at the end. However after audience feedback we found that our target audience expected to see more inter title's, especially towards the end of the trailer. We wanted the inter-title to appear nearer to the end of the trailer so that it wouldn't interrupt the suspense that had been built previously. Therefore, we decided to add in an inter title giving an indication towards the release date, leaving audiences in anticipation and excited to see the full film. By not revealing an explicit date it also causes audiences to further research the trailer, possibly through the films social media platforms, or through viewing my poster or magazine front cover. We decided to transition in this inter title by using a fade to black, with it initially appearing over a low angle shot of tree branches, and then fading into its own inter-title with a black screen. This inter title shows synergy, using the font that has been used throughout the project, whilst also being placed on a black screen - similar to the final title scenes and police report section of the trailer.
After our initial title frames had occurred we then decided to include a concluding intertitle promoting our AS production, as this would entice another group of audiences. We also used a hashtag to signal to audiences that we were using social media as a platform for promotion, as the hashtag symbol has become a way for audiences to show their interest in a topic. This appeals directly to our target audience, as most young adults use social media in this way.
Change 5:
Low key lighting is a key mise-en-scene element of crime-thriller films as it suggests mystery and adds a frightening element to the footage. Although we had enabled our filming was on foggy and cloudier days, some audiences felt that this was not enough. Consequently, as we were unable to re-film footage, we experimented on Premiere Pro with adding special effects in order to darken the footage. We felt that we could use lighting in a creative way and use it to signify the change between safety and panic in the trailer. Therefore, we decided that as soon as the child is shown to leave the park, the colour of the frames would change, to appear darker and more low-key. After showing this final version to audiences, they really liked this change from daylight to low-key lighting, as it helped them to understand the transition into the equilibrium stage of the trailer. The change in lighting, achieved through the 'Luma Key' effect, was described by our peers as 'un-nerving' which is the reaction we aimed to create. We also used the 'shadow/highlight' effect controls to lower the brightness to the level we were happy with.
Poster Feedback
I received various feedback from my teachers and peers about my poster. I found this feedback particularly helpful as it enabled me to create the best poster I possibly could.
Positive Feedback:
- Really liked the picture including both of the characters
- Audiences liked the font and date of release
Things to change:
- Add some more colour in some way
- Make the title stand out more
Change 1:
Initially when making my poster I aimed to keep a very minimal, dark and eerie colour scheme, as I felt that this would be suitable for the crime-thriller genre. However, after recieving audience feedback, and also carrying out extended research I found that it more more conventional for posters to include a range of colour, to attract attention from audiences. Using the Nightcrawler poster as inspiration, I decided to change the star rating to gold/yellow. I felt that this would be effective as gold stars are connotative of brilliance and good work, therefore audiences would apply this idea of excellence to my poster and my trailer. I also felt that the yellow acted as a suitable contrast to the darker background colours, directing an initial point of focus when audiences see the poster.
Change 2:

Some audiences stated that to improve the poster I could make the title more prominent. They stated and I agreed that it could be difficult to see the Film name, as it is black, and blend in with the dark background and black branches. Therefore to overcome this issue I used the blending options on Photoshop to provide a white 'Stroke' effect around the text, meaning it could be seen much easier on the dark grey background. The main purpose of a film poster is to attract the attention of the public, and provide information about the film - therefore meaning the title is crucial, as this needs to stick in the publics mind. Having a large, prominent and eye-catching title is a key convention of film posters in general, therefore I think this change drastically improved my poster.
Change 3:
I originally included the quotes 'thrilling' and 'nerve-racking' on my poster, as I felt these words linked directly to the genre and consequently would attract the target audience. They are both positive statements that would be linked to enjoying the film. However, after feedback from my class I decided to add in who said the quote, as this is a form of star power - because audiences would recognise 'The Times' and 'Empire Magazine' institutions, and trust their opinion on my film/trailer. This is a convention commonly used on film posters, as it provides an insight into the quality and reviews of the film, a factor that many audiences want to be aware of.
| Final Poster |
Magazine Front Cover Feedback
Although changes that were recommended to be made were minor, they ended up really improving the final appearance of my poster, allowing me to include more conventions of a typical magazine front cover.
Positive Feedback:
- Good name of magazine - positive connotations that link with film industry
- Liked the use of a plug and incentive of 'Free Cinema Tickets'
Negative Feedback:
- Too empty - needs more added to it eg. coverlines
- Could include more than one image - promote other films
- Bottom section is too empty, enlarge font of add more text
Change 1:
My feedback suggested that I could add more coverlines to make my cover more vibrant and to give more information about what would be included inside the magazine. However, it was difficult to add more text without it covering the main image or interfering with other text. I thought that the right section of my magazine would be the best place to put these coverlines, as there was sufficient space to add in text and a photo without it covering the girl in the main image. Using the words 'exclusive' also entices audiences as they feel superior to those who do not know the information inside. Also, the use of an actors name would act as star power, gaining another group of audiences, who are fond of the actors other products.
Change 2:
Adding an image linking to these new cover-lines was my next alteration. I included a close-up of the main character from another thriller film, called 'Delirium', which included conventions of the genre such as low key-lighting, and dark, mysterious costumes. I decided to place a white border around the photo, as it blended in more suitably due to the colour scheme being mainly white, black and red. I feel that adding the extra cover-lines and image improved my poster, and increased the professionalism and realism of its appearance.
Change 3:

Feedback also suggested that I added something, or increase the size of elements at the bottom of my magazine. I then realised that the space underneath the film title was too bland, and did some extended research into what real magazine include in this bottom section. In this research I found that the use of a plus sign, and then providing additional information was conventional, therefore attempted to recreate this is my own cover, which I feel was a success. I added a red plus sign, similar to the one seen on the right, as this fits with the colour scheme of the magazine, and then included information about another similar genre film - Love Me.





























